- there is no rationale with conventions that you intend to use, no description of your idea and details of how you'll achieve your goal - there is no film schedule which was your job too
- rationale explains your overall idea well, good explanation of technical elements - brainstorm has some good ideas for conventions / narrative - needs more intentional evidence that you understand what conventions are, visuals/ photos/ examples from other movies would have increased your marks, showing the look and feel of what you want to achieve and giving visuals and explanations for all the conventions you intend on doing (shot types, music ideas, shadows, camera movement etc) - film schedule??
Hi Addison
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- there is no rationale with conventions that you intend to use, no description of your idea and details of how you'll achieve your goal
- there is no film schedule which was your job too
Overall score - 14/20
ReplyDelete- rationale explains your overall idea well, good explanation of technical elements
- brainstorm has some good ideas for conventions / narrative
- needs more intentional evidence that you understand what conventions are, visuals/ photos/ examples from other movies would have increased your marks, showing the look and feel of what you want to achieve and giving visuals and explanations for all the conventions you intend on doing (shot types, music ideas, shadows, camera movement etc)
- film schedule??