Comments - some great creative ideas - rationale needed to have a bit more of the 'why' - link what you're doing (character choices/ location choices/ lighting choices etc, all with the effect it will have on your audience. It is a great overall description of what you'll film but we need to keep seeing you take your homework deeper, you could have added in iconography and symbolism and really shown off why you may include different thriller conventions. - storyboard does the job, could have had a bit more detail - every time the camera angle changes, you need another storyboard. If you were going to use 'lots of close-up's' to show that beginning part, then show us each frame of that part of the film.
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ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 29/40
ReplyDeleteRationale:15/20
Storyboard:7/10
Brainstorm:7/10
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- some great creative ideas
- rationale needed to have a bit more of the 'why' - link what you're doing (character choices/ location choices/ lighting choices etc, all with the effect it will have on your audience. It is a great overall description of what you'll film but we need to keep seeing you take your homework deeper, you could have added in iconography and symbolism and really shown off why you may include different thriller conventions.
- storyboard does the job, could have had a bit more detail - every time the camera angle changes, you need another storyboard. If you were going to use 'lots of close-up's' to show that beginning part, then show us each frame of that part of the film.