- I like the overall concept of your action-thriller, just remember to keep opening sequences simple (you're just introducing your audience to the key character/s and the storyline. Clever ending though - well done giving things like the fight scene a go, the make-up and sound effects added a sinister touch - the camera movements were good and kept a nice pace for the film - I'm sorry that you guys didn't record that phone conversation again. Having a clear, well rehearsed narrative explaining what was happening and setting the scene would have been so much more effective - Unfortunately the continuity is slightly compromised in the beginning with using different footage with different lighting levels. Keep this in mind next time when planning your film schedule. Any shots needing continuous lighting need to be filmed consecutively at a time with constant light - your end shot and end title is very effective and is in-keeping with your overall tone and feel - Sadly you forgot your credits! This is a huge part of the opening title sequence and in this case, a main part of the brief. I'm sure you just forgot last minute, just make sure details like that are in!
Hi Addison
ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 16/20
- I like the overall concept of your action-thriller, just remember to keep opening sequences simple (you're just introducing your audience to the key character/s and the storyline. Clever ending though
- well done giving things like the fight scene a go, the make-up and sound effects added a sinister touch
- the camera movements were good and kept a nice pace for the film
- I'm sorry that you guys didn't record that phone conversation again. Having a clear, well rehearsed narrative explaining what was happening and setting the scene would have been so much more effective
- Unfortunately the continuity is slightly compromised in the beginning with using different footage with different lighting levels. Keep this in mind next time when planning your film schedule. Any shots needing continuous lighting need to be filmed consecutively at a time with constant light
- your end shot and end title is very effective and is in-keeping with your overall tone and feel
- Sadly you forgot your credits! This is a huge part of the opening title sequence and in this case, a main part of the brief. I'm sure you just forgot last minute, just make sure details like that are in!