You have the examples there and have given a great basic outline of the plot/ narrative/ story / character conventions and themes in these types of sub-genres, which is great. To really get the marks here you need to also include more information on techniques and technical conventions of the sub-genres including lighting, sound, camera work and editing to really show you understand how they all work.
Presentation-wise, keep you blog nice and neat. Your Slideshow has published as a scrolling ream of pages, you need it to actually be a slideshow interactive and interesting to look at. Delete the first version of just the text.
Hi Addison
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You have the examples there and have given a great basic outline of the plot/ narrative/ story / character conventions and themes in these types of sub-genres, which is great. To really get the marks here you need to also include more information on techniques and technical conventions of the sub-genres including lighting, sound, camera work and editing to really show you understand how they all work.
Presentation-wise, keep you blog nice and neat. Your Slideshow has published as a scrolling ream of pages, you need it to actually be a slideshow interactive and interesting to look at. Delete the first version of just the text.